Song "Bag of Dreams" is popping its way to the top

Song “Bag of Dreams” is popping its way to the top
Today’s been my first scheduled rehearsal for “Bag of Dreams”, and it came out better than planned. Lory, the lady from the studio, and a musician from her band, came here bringing a guitar to practice the song, and it came out just beautiful. I sang the song for them a few times, but since he’s an excellent musician, apparently, he was able to pick the cords up pretty quick.
There were a few modifications and adjustments that we have made for the song, but it was as if the song was speaking up for itself.
The song kept it’s upbeat pop sound,while still being a very sweet, touchy song.
I disagreed with adding an extra part to the chorus, but the way the song went with that and a few other little changes was just swimmingly.
Tomorrow Lory will call to set up a time when we can meet at the studio to add a few more things such as a beet of drumtrack and a better sound, and then we will finally record it, as it is going so well.
When we were done, I showed the demo to my mom, my uncle, and Cokie, and they all said it sounds great, so I guess it does, but I know this song will most likely help me get there.
Cokie just told me a few minutes ago that as it is, it sounds like a number 1 hit!
Well, gotta go show it to Steven and then tomorrow I’m going to wait for Lory to call so we can set up a time to work on this song.
Laters:
The future popstar! Would “Bag of Dreams really get me there?